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 This is an awesome one xD


The door of Colonel Mustang's office burst open, Edward and Alphonse both walked towards the colonel who was busy with paperwork. Edward grumbled a bit before he slammed both of his hands on mustang's desk.

"Isn't there something we can do today?" Ed said looking extremely bored.

"You can walk around the military. Away from me" Mustang sighed.

"We already did that! Isn't there like, some mission that involves some beating to the head?" Ed whined

"Fine, if you insist." Mustang sighed yet again

" who're we beating up today?" Ed asked excitedly

"Not so fast, Full Metal. This isn't YOUR's ____________'s" Mustang explained

"__-__________? That's great! I love hanging out with her!" Al cheerfully said

"What?! What's so great about _____________? She's just a unsocial, useless, annoying, selfish-"

"Keep talking" a voice boomed from behind Ed, making him jump. he turned around to see that the source of the voice was you.

"Oh, it's you." Ed sharply said,  narrowing his eyes at you. Your cold eyes stared deep into his before you turned to look at the colonel.

"Oi, Fire guy... what's metal butt doing here?" you pointed at Ed

"He wants to go on a mission...and apparently, he's going to join you on yours. And for the last time, please call me Colonel Mustang..." Mustang sighed.


Your __________, The mind alchemist. You have no last name...considering you have no parents to begin with...and for your alchemy...well, no one knows for sure if it even is alchemy...your 'alchemy' doesn't even need a transmutation circle...just focusing on something seems to do the trick. You were 15, the same age as Edward. And coincidentally, around 144cm too.

You didn't quite understand why Ed hates you... to tell you the truth, you haven't even really had a full conversation with him at all. But you know Al well...he's friendly and sweet.


"Of all people I have to be stuck with, it's with you." you sighed

"I wouldn't have asked if I knew this was YOUR mission!!" Ed yelled

"Fine then, don't go! See if I care!" you yanked his collar


"Stop! Enough fighting you two! Your ruining your relationship with each other!" Al interrupted

"WE'RE NOT IN A RELATIONSHIP!!!" both of you yelled in unison

In response to that harsh reply to Al, he started to cry and ran away from you two.

"Al, wait! Don't cry because of ___________!" Ed called. You elbowed him in the stomach for that.

"What's your problem?!" you yelled

"What's YOUR problem?!?!" Ed yelled back

"My problem?! You hate me for no reason! Do you know how annoying that is?! What about YOU?!" you broke

"WELL IT'S NOT MY FAULT THAT YOUR SO DARN ATTRACTIVE!!!!" Ed yelled. Everyone who heard that stared at the both of you.



"You think I'm pretty?" you blushed

"Hell no...your...cute" he turned away.

"Well..uh... thanks I guess" you kissed Ed's cheek and walked out the door.

"W-wait...HEYYY!!!! WHERE THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOUR GOING?!?!?!" Ed ran out the door following you.

"I have a mission remember?" you looked back, seeing him running to you.

"I just to give you something" he scratched the back of his neck and kissed you. After that, he broke the kiss.



he hit you in the head

"WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!?!" you yelled


"Fine, just don't hit me again." you continued to walk knowing Ed was following behind. You then felt a hand hold yours firmly. You looked at your side to see Ed holding your hand, blushing. He looked back at you and noticed you were looking at him.

"W-what?! I-I just wanted to hold your hand, nothing special." he looked away.

"MmHmm... to think someone like you is a tsundere." you said

"Tsun...dere?" he didn't know what it means...oh well...

"It means short" you smirked


Roy looked under his desk to find Al crying underneath.
"What's the matter now?" Roy asked
"Ed and ___________'s fighting" Al sniffed
"?? wasn't they both kissing a few minutes ago?" Roy raised and eyebrow.
"W-what!?!!?!?! No way! I knew it! They were made for each other weren't they?!" Al said cheerfully.
"...didn't Full Metal punched ________ in the head after kissing her?" Roy asked again
"he....punched her after...kissing her?"
My fav :D

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Jessleia Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Student Artist
The story's way when she gets punched : WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR
My way when I get punched : bitch you made a horible mistake
RaikaKun Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014 true xD I can relate...

Awesome icon pic~ It's so badass :iconsparkleeyeyuiplz:
Jessleia Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Student Artist
Thanks it's from one of my fav anime's
RaikaKun Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014
Shingeki no kyojin is a MASTERPIECE!!!! I LOVE IT!!!
Jessleia Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Student Artist
Yep :)
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014
d'aaawww~ just lemme hug Alphonse already~
Dragons103 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Student Writer
Out of all the characters in the universe Al deserves a hug the most. He may look intimidating and is currently in armour, but HES LIKE THE BIGGEST LITTLE TEDDY BEAR AND I WANNA HUG HIM SO BADLY. *glops Al*
Al: O_o
Me: I'm sorry Al...but I just had to
ShadowGamer1315 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol poor Al
SIT-ART Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this person is just like me
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